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“No, no im happy here now,”. the im, should be like this- I'm, no matter what part of the sentence it comes in. and my normal thing with the period ...

She placed a pin in my pal palm? with an m right??? “Fuck, but look t it, it looks well good another incomplete word. In this case I think t ...

Rob said he didn’t care how far she went, but I could tell that the woman that he once loved... the use of the word "that" confused me a bit, ...

“Your very mature for your age, aren’t you? Your should be you're Other than that it was wonderful! I love what you're doing with this story and the way it's ...

“And what to eat? How about the chicken? It’s real good here,” Few things about this, the first being "It's real good..." for some reason really would flow better, I ...

“My names Jamiy” there should be a ' in names. name's. =) But other than that, and a few grammatical errors here and there, I think it's a really good ...

I seem to be the only person not seriously obsessed with the books. I read them both, at a friends request, and I'm not saying that I hated them, just ...

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE (cant say it enough) LOVE, Burned. I want to read crank, but the library "lost" it. yeah...I don't know what it ...

It doesn't surprise me at all that this book has so many reviews. I mean, it's awesome. I love how different it is from anything else I've read. Except for ...

:!: WARNING, THERE MAY BE SPOILERS IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE BOOKS YET :!: Well, I read all three books in the series and I still don't know if I ...

A great and terrible beauty was one of my favorite books...I'm not sure if I like the way Gemma and Kartik are portrayed here. It doesn't seem like the way ...

A few confusions.... His eyes were a green colour, with rich chocolate brown erupting from the pupils. I think you can say color instead of colour...although I never did figure ...

Ello, I shall start by saying that I really liked it. It caught my attention from the start and kept my attention. Which I think is one of the most ...

K, So I read it. And now I'm at a loss for what to do. -Not really looking for grammar/spelling type stuff to be pointed out at this point. I ...

I had coils and coils of springy brown curls, that eventually flattened themselves out, and large, wet eyes that gazed at everything they laid upon. My pudgy cheeks and hands ...