IzumiRyuichi

Hello, I am Ryuichi and I have a couple of comments- Good job on the story, I would definitely suggest continuing this story because I found it to be quite ...

Hey Forest Queen, my name is Izumi Ryuichi and I'm here for a quick review. First off, I extremely like your pathos style of writing. You showed every thought in ...

Hey Mackenzie, Its Izi here to review. I decide to only review the preface for now, but so you know- Red - Needs editing Blue - What I would change ...

Well, this is very good. I always loved the metal gear solid series. I like this except for jonny being the new agent... It's kinda weird. Besides that, hope you ...

Hello NativeCatcher and great job on the story! I Only noticed one little mistake in the story but beside it, the story was great. It kind of scared me when ...

Hello Loveless, I'm Izumi and I love your story. The reason, its detail, and your great ability with the pathos style of writing. You described your (or whoever it is) ...

Hey Zero, I'm here for a quick review of your story. Except for a couple of grammar mistakes here and there, I only noticed one. The young elf enters the ...

Wow. I'm am amazed at this piece of work. I've never seen anyone write such a good romantic plot in my life. I did tear up a little I must ...

In her dream she saw many things. Her mom, dad and her brother. Butterflies flew about her and whispered songs in her ears. Two birds chirped happily. Well, I noticed ...

Hey Protonoob... I mean, ColdZero. I'm not particularly here to review, but I am here to give my opinion on the story. First, this is an amazing story. I read ...

Hello natalie and welcome to the forums. I am here to review, but not critique. I found this to be very well written. You described suicide in the most of ...

Hello Bottomless Eyes and welcome to YWS. I've come here to review, just like every other story. To begin, I liked the grammar. I didn't notice any bad mistakes, but ...

This is amazing. I had no idea this was going to turn into a love story. I'm not good with romance, but this was the best I've seen. When the ...

Well, all I have to say, is that this is outstanding. The detail describing everything was phenomenal and you showed emotions quite well. When Titani's father came home the way ...

Very good. I don't have any big changes, but I do have a couple. If you could, I would suggest continuing the conversation just a little bit. I think it ...