IzumiRyuichi

Awesome story! I liked the pressure you put on the reader to read on and find out who this "being" was! Overall I found a few rushed parts and some ...

I really can't anything about this. I am amazed at what I just read. I gained a smile as I read and then was struck down at the end. It ...

Here's A quick review. First, it definitely was rushed. You used little detail which didn't keep me interested. If this was longer, I would have stopped. Besides that, I think ...

Hey rain, great job on the story. It was a short, but amazing story. You described the thoughts of the boy so well along with his actions. You portrayed almost ...

Well, first off, great job on the story. I liked the detail you put into the story. Even though I wish what happened in this story doesn't happen in real ...

Hey Awesome, I read both parts of your story, and they both were awesome (Corny joke...)! I liked how you described everything that was going on around you and how ...

Great job loveless! I read the first part of this story and loved it. I now have read the second part, and its great! I really didn't find any mistakes ...

Hello FictionWriter, Izumi here for a review. It was a good story, but It needs some work... Red is what I think should be changed Blue is my Suggestion As ...

Hey Cold, I'm here for a quick review. The first thing I have to say, is try to make it slightly more in detail. I loved the story overall, but ...

Well hello Forestqueen, Izumi here for a quick review. First off, it was very good. I liked how you put what could be a long story into a few paragraphs. ...

Hello tmasia and welcome to YWS! My name is IzumiRyuichi and I'm here for a quick review. First off, I liked the story. I didn't have much time to read ...

Hello Animia and welcome to Young Writers Society! My name is IzumiRyuichi, and I'm here for a quick review. First off, great job on the poem. Your description of the ...

Hey icanbefixed... (weird name), my name is Ryuichi and I love your poem. I like how you describe what I think is choices in life, but with hands. Crossing the ...

This is pretty good. I like the description (whoever wrote this) of the feelings of the people. When (Insert name here) said "tummy", it killed the mood a little ._. ...

Good Job on this poem. I like how you described power and how one wants it so much. This doesn't quite have to do with your style, but if you ...