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Re: Impossible but Bound [Edited]
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Feb 15, 2015
A very sincere stoem (basically a word I made that means a story with heavy poetic elements or an atmosphere that is strongly poetic) that has a nice beginning a ... -
Re: Left Brain vs. Right Brain
Yeah . . . I don't what happened down there. Sorry.
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Re: Left Brain vs. Right Brain
Yeah . . . I don't what happened down there. Sorry.
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Re: Left Brain vs. Right Brain
This is very funny and whimsical! It actually brings out some nostalgia out of me for one reason or another.
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: Other Half
*Spoilers* Great story, it's got that genuine darkness and evil that I like in fiction. Though, at the end when the girl was throwing up and getting all sick and ...
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Re: Disordered in Love
Brings the feel of chaos among deep love and suffering, possibly hints of strife. I like it. :)
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: The Gorilla Man
Lol, that's the point......sorta. She's supposed to be a ratchet girl in a suburban environment.
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: The Gorilla Man
Nah, I was making fun of the "ratchet" chicks I saw at high school. Thanks for the critique though, I actually read it and took in what you said, every ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: Free Write Friday
Great story, but don't take the comments of a-holes at your school too seriously. Keep writing on :).
Nov 2, 2014