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Re: Tenebrae Chapter 1 Part 2
Thanks for the review, constructive criticism is always welcomed. I've been trying my best to visualize rather than describe, but I feel like I have a lot more reading and ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae Chapter 1 Part 2
Thanks for the critique, I agree with you on the dialogue part, I definitely should've put more instead of just . . . pure info-dump. Also, I'm with you on ...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1
Nice, thanks for telling me about this.
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae Chapter 1 Part 1
The reason the planet was not scrutinized was because it was in an "obscure corner of the galaxy", though I probably should've put something more along the lines of "practically ...
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: The Jungle Room
Alright, thanks. That cleared things up.
Mar 12, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae Chapter 1 Part 1
Cool, I'll check out you opera. Thanks for viewing and reviewing my work. :)
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae Chapter 1 Part 1
Thank you for reading and review my work. :)
Mar 5, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae: Prologue
Thank you for the criticism, it is most welcomed. This entry served as a very short and to the point prologue to give readers a little background info before getting ...
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: wait and see
Just keep at it.
Feb 25, 2015 -
Re: wait and see
Nothing's horrible about it. Though I appreciate the "no rest til perfection" attitude.
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Tenebrae: Prologue
Thank you very much for both the input and the correction, sorry you can barely tell what's going on here, but you won't see any connection to the angelic shooters ...
Feb 21, 2015 -
Re: Five o'clock in Bethesda.
I take this person hates being separated from the thing that brings him joy.
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: wait and see
Rebellious and straight to the point. I like it.
Feb 17, 2015 -
Re: The Lay of Middlebrass
This story is really cool! It's a breath of fresh air from the usual stuff we get on here. Though this is not a review, I think you should've substituted ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: The Photo and The Billion
Definitely post more.
Feb 15, 2015
