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Ishan212

Ishan212

  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: The Daughter Of The Raj

    Thanks for reviewing on my work. May I know from which country you are from? I mean after reading your review I am sure you are not certainly from India ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The Sun Has Set Again

    ScyTheMeister Thank You for commenting on my poem. I want clarify certain things. I want to tell you that in India we refer to our people as 'sons' of 'Bharat ...

    Apr 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: The Sun Has Set Again

    LittleLee; Thank You for reviewing my work. "The Sun Has Set Again" means that another soldier has given up his highjly valuable life for the sake of his motherland. But ...

    Apr 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Culture, Literature Re: Deleted

    Thank you Dracula for reviewing my work I'd like to bring certain important things to your notice. Deepavali or Diwali are two different names of the same festival The protagonist ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Politics, Realistic Re: Hejendj

    tigerraye Thank you for reviewing my work. I need to clarify somethings with you. First, 'Rama',in the story refers to Lord Rama one of the incarnations of Lord Vishnu. You ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Politics, Realistic Re: Hejendj

    tigerraye Thank you for reviewing my work. I need to clarify somethings with you. First, 'Rama',in the story refers to Lord Rama one of the incarnations of Lord Vishnu. You ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: That Town

    I am sorry for the comment. I must see my mistakes and try to improve them. Please forgive me for my comment Again sorry.

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: That Town

    Zilly Wik, You are writing as if you are teaching English at Oxford. If my work was having grammatical errors why didn't MS Word underline them? I would write it ...

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: That Town

    Thank you Jazzdracula for your review. I would make the meanings of those Indian words for you and for our other non Hindi speaking friends. beta; son. In India it ...

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Old Beech Tree

    Actually because of a server error my review was submitted twice. I am really very sorry for this.

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Old Beech Tree

    Hi Raven Lord, I am Ishan and I am here to review your short story. So here we go; You have written a fantastic short story. Your theme was very ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Bumble Bee

    It is a nice poem but I would admit that the poem was not humorous. By just adding 'Hee hee! Ha ha! Ha ha, he he!' the poem does not ...

    Oct 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: It's Been Fun, Percy

    What is this? A poem? Could you please tell me the meaning of this poem? 'Go drool in your sleep And be a dam seaweed brain Just never leave me' ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl in the Moon

    Hi Ruby, You've written a fantastic poem describing the moon. But what I didn't like is that there was no point in your poem describing the changing faces of the ...

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: METH

    What was it ? A mad father killing his wife and son and then the story is over ? The story was not having any theme but then also you ...

    Oct 4, 2014


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