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Re: The Daughter Of The Raj
Thanks for reviewing on my work. May I know from which country you are from? I mean after reading your review I am sure you are not certainly from India ...
Apr 20, 2017 -
Re: The Sun Has Set Again
ScyTheMeister Thank You for commenting on my poem. I want clarify certain things. I want to tell you that in India we refer to our people as 'sons' of 'Bharat ...
Apr 13, 2017 -
Re: The Sun Has Set Again
LittleLee; Thank You for reviewing my work. "The Sun Has Set Again" means that another soldier has given up his highjly valuable life for the sake of his motherland. But ...
Apr 11, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Thank you Dracula for reviewing my work I'd like to bring certain important things to your notice. Deepavali or Diwali are two different names of the same festival The protagonist ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Hejendj
tigerraye Thank you for reviewing my work. I need to clarify somethings with you. First, 'Rama',in the story refers to Lord Rama one of the incarnations of Lord Vishnu. You ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Hejendj
tigerraye Thank you for reviewing my work. I need to clarify somethings with you. First, 'Rama',in the story refers to Lord Rama one of the incarnations of Lord Vishnu. You ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: That Town
I am sorry for the comment. I must see my mistakes and try to improve them. Please forgive me for my comment Again sorry.
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: That Town
Zilly Wik, You are writing as if you are teaching English at Oxford. If my work was having grammatical errors why didn't MS Word underline them? I would write it ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: That Town
Thank you Jazzdracula for your review. I would make the meanings of those Indian words for you and for our other non Hindi speaking friends. beta; son. In India it ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: The Old Beech Tree
Actually because of a server error my review was submitted twice. I am really very sorry for this.
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: The Old Beech Tree
Hi Raven Lord, I am Ishan and I am here to review your short story. So here we go; You have written a fantastic short story. Your theme was very ...
Oct 9, 2014 -
Re: Bumble Bee
It is a nice poem but I would admit that the poem was not humorous. By just adding 'Hee hee! Ha ha! Ha ha, he he!' the poem does not ...
Oct 8, 2014 -
Re: It's Been Fun, Percy
What is this? A poem? Could you please tell me the meaning of this poem? 'Go drool in your sleep And be a dam seaweed brain Just never leave me' ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Girl in the Moon
Hi Ruby, You've written a fantastic poem describing the moon. But what I didn't like is that there was no point in your poem describing the changing faces of the ...
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: METH
What was it ? A mad father killing his wife and son and then the story is over ? The story was not having any theme but then also you ...
Oct 4, 2014
