Inspiredravens

Well thank you:) I am sure that you can learn to show, it just takes a slightly different thinking, in a way I guess. My work is far from perfect, ...

I always start with a sound if I can't think of much else. One of the easiest way to "show" things is by... Well, I don't know how to say ...

Hey! Got both chapters 2 and 3 out now :) Sorry, I know its been a long time...

I will review this! I am making a note here for you, I have a few others who have requested my presence first, but I will be back!

Wonderful! I loved it! Just a few things (small enough so that this isn't really a review), but don't capitalize every line. You have commas at the end of some ...

Love it!

Thank you- I didn't realize that. That makes me feel so much better, is there a way to report him?

Holy Cow I love this! It sounds like a smash poem almost, but its really awesome! Congrats on feature- definitely deserved

Thank you, I found his comment odd, but there are always two sides to everything. I'm glad you can connect with it- that a great accomplishment for me :)

Thanks :) the last two lines didn't seem to work no matter how I tried it so I just threw it out there...

Just an artful statement of what is going on currently. My father can often be emotionally abusive but it is not my place as the child to call him out ...

I'm sorry that is how you feel about it. I was trying to be artsy, not necessarily solve or create a problem. This was just a statement of my feelings ...

Thanks :)

Thanks. I didn't think much about the feelings when I wrote this, it just sounded right at the moment :) I'm so glad I was able to make you feel ...

Thanks. I didn't think much about the feelings when I wrote this, it just sounded right at the moment :) I'm so glad I was able to make you feel ...