Inspiredravens

It is about whatever you think it is, but in my perspective an emotionally abusive father

Thank you! I will definitely take the puncuation into account.

Thanks:)

Thanks! I will take that into account!

My pleasure:) and I understand, thanks for clearing that up!

Thanks! I'll probably get around to fixing the convo today:)

Beautiful- I can't review much, therefore this is a short comment. However, one thing: the timing is good for the first 2 stanzas, but in the third it falters and ...

Thanks so much!

Loved the style and placement in your lines. It is a good freestyle with artistic emphasis (which can be really hard to do on a computer). I really did love ...

Beautiful, including yourself.

Beautiful

Holy Cow. This is amazing and awesome and perfectly funny. Perfection.

I think that you have chosen not to see God's light, and I do not wish to get into an argument over this. However, this essay saddens me no matter ...

thanks!

thanks for the comment, I understand what you are saying about the education thing but I needed a question there, I can tweak it though. Again, thanks :)