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I'm good :) And thanks for the review- you were very helpful!

LOVED this. Very nicely structured and well-written, in my eyes.

Thanks :) I agree with what you said about the hyphen. However, with regards to the first stanza, I think it's down to the tone in which you read the ...

it's a pleasure :) I can only apologize for the spelling mistakes!

Thanks a lot! :) and I could never forget the Frozen Fahrvergnugens!

Thanks! Happy review day! :)

Thank you! I'm glad the imagery felt strong to you :)

Thanks for reviewing! I will take your suggestions on board :)

Thanks a lot! :) I actually shared the same feelings as you regarding the end of the poem, but I think it's grown on me since I wrote it. I ...

awesome :) those poor cockroaches, we've stolen all their jobs.

Thanks :)

I look forward to it! :)

I loved this so much. The end was sort of surreal- I felt as shocked as the boy taking the photograph. Absolutely beautiful. Your writing style is gorgeous. I'm the ...

Thank you! :)

Your welcome! And keep at it- your writing has flair :)