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Such an intriguing poem. You have some fantastic, interesting lines oging on here. " mate with chee chilip chee chilip calls, almost the same noise that sickly doorway hinges". Personally, ...

A beutiful poem. Both mentally and visually, you had me entranced. The structure and grammar of this piece are perfect, and I have absolutely no suggestions of how you could ...

So beautiful! A lovely, lovely haiku (I laways find them hard to write). A review for you: "The first raindrops fell". Instantly, you've drawn the reader into your poem. You ...

This is B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. SUCH a good read. I love this poem so much! There are a few grammatical errors, such as the use of "i" instead of "I" and the ...

Wow! This is a really deep poem, and I loved it. I didn't realise quite how deeply it ran at first, then I noticed allt he little themes you have ...

Hello :) This is a lovely poem! I like the use of repetition throughout, it really reinforces what you're explaining love to be. I think I understoof the premise of ...

This is an EXCELLENT poem. I loved it! It works brilliantly in a free verse style, and you've structured it brilliantly. Right from the off: " Wingless flutters my soul, ...

This is a very powerful poem. You create a strong beginning with the line "muted chatter" as you have immediately got your reader's thinking about how chatter can be "muted". ...

What a short, powerful piece. I like the idea of it being a to-do list- it makes the writing seem more like a person struggle. A way of fixing oneself. ...

This is a cool poem :) I like the lengths of the lines and the shape of the poem itself. There is some great use of words and their definitions ...

This is brilliant. You got my attention from the very beginning with that line "And I thought I had a brother". It's such an odd thing for someone to think, ...

This was a cute little piece- I enjoyed it :) Some of the images you create in your writing are really interesting. For example: "he would melt into a puddle ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I addresses some very deep, phsycological issues in a clever and interesting way. You kept my attention throughout the piece and really made me think ...

This is so good! And it rings true, as well. Since I've joined this site it's been non-stop reviews! I like your rhyming pattern and syntax, you've crafted this poem ...

What a lovely piece :) This is a very sensitive poem, which conveys emotion very well. I love the structure of it and the ending, you finish on a definitive ...