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This is an amazing piece. I was reading it in my head as though someone were speaking it, and I think it would make a wonderful piece to be used ...

Great poem. What a clever ending! I love the use of text messages throughout. It kept the piece snappy and interesting. Although I didn't find the poem laugh-out-loud funny, I ...

This poem is beautifully written. The structure is fantastic, and I love that there are a number of lines that rhyme. Some of the imagery used is very striking, such ...

Hello, Inkpot here to review your first work! I'd like to start off by saying that there was some great imagery used throughout this piece. Some of the sentences and ...

This is an incredibly interesting piece. I'll make my review structured so I can lay out my thoughts clearly. Things I really liked about your work: 1. The layout. I ...

I really enjoyed this piece. Your wiriting is clear, well phrased and with extensive use of vocabulary. It is sensitive whilst also maintaining structural strength. The opening of your piece: ...

Hello! I REALLY like you poem. A LOT. It isn't often that I say that, too. I've read a lot of great poems on here, but not many that I ...

This is a great poem! The structure, rhythme and rhyme are all spot on, and you had me gripped from start to finish. I love the repetition of "A place" ...

What an interesting poem! This was really cool to read- I love the rhyming pattern and the whole topsy-turvy nature of it. "inside I felt the downward" makes me think ...

Hello :) here is the review you requested: I've never seen Supernatural, but I love this poem! The layout is very interesting, and kept me gripped throughout. The telling of ...

This poem made me turn and check behind me! This sort of poem isn't normally my cup of tea, but you pulled it off nicely, I think. Great job- I ...

A fantastic poem. I love it. "The reflection in the mirror of her walking out the door" implies that the narator cannot look at the woman herself as she leaves, ...

Wow! I love this! You had me at: "If a mirror breaks in the house" ;) This is a great opening, as we are immediately introduced to the idea of ...

What an interesting poem! You have layed out this piece in such an intriguing way, and because of this I was gripped the whole way through. Great stuff. "With neon ...

A beautiful poem. At first, by the way you have crafted the piece so gently and with such subtle language, I truly thought the animal was just asleep. The neding ...