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Re: How She Became Chloris(The Nymph of Spring and Flowers)
Hey! This was awesome! I'm not a great poet but I really liked this. I've never heard of Chloris before and it confused me. I thought the goddess of spring ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: A Reminiscence
This made me cry. I realize that you are fully aware of the fact that it made me cry, or you wouldn't have written it that way, but it was ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Love (Through the Eyes of a Gamer)
I really loved this poem, because I've been exactly where you are. My boyfriend and I met through online gaming (though we did more roleplaying) and he got me into ...
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: the misconception
Don't take this the wrong way- this feels like a Taylor Swift piece. And that's good! I love Taylor Swift! The poem actually kind of gave me the shivers. I ...
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: Nothing Left Behind
I like this poem. I'm assuming it's free style, because I couldn't find an easy pattern for the rhythm to follow. While it oozed emotion, I had trouble telling exactly ...
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: "I'm sorry"
Oh. My. God. I loved this poem so much. I think it was because I constantly relate to it. It feels BEAUTIFUL.
Jan 20, 2013 -
Re: Hollow Ruin
This piece is very dark. And by dark I mean it's wonderful. The imagery is vivid, even though abstract. It felt sort of like....power. The main character's voice seems very ...
Jan 16, 2013 -
Re: Fray
Hey! I really love this bit of work. It has feeling in it, but keeps up a cute and peppy beat. I'm not amazing with the beats in poetry, more ...
Jan 16, 2013
