IngridClayre

It was a great story, and (unlike me) you only made one mistake that I caught: “Goodmorning Curtis!” She’d call wiggling her rabbit at me, “Apple and I were waiting ...

I think this is so beautiful. I love your writing style. The way you put words together is like magic. The only thing I found awkward was this: "I must ...

I really like the beginning "If I shall sing a song for thee to tug at thy heartstrings, maybe a change will settle on thy mind to choose a man ...

I think that 'a day of light' (in the second line) sounds a bit awkward. I found myself mistaking if for 'the light of day' and rereading it. And the ...

I really like this. It's very dark and sad- that's what I got from it anyway. I love the way you only rhymed here and there instead of every other ...

This has great potential. I really like your writing style... it draws you in sorta! Now that I've read more of your writing, I'm even more excited to work with ...

I love this poem. I like it because it isn't something you have to decipher- I'm not good at figuring out meanings of poems. I loved this. I like that ...