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Re: Death's Reign: Chapter III
Whoo! Keep it up! :D The only significant thing I noticed here were some grammar errors (which you're probably tired of me pointing out but I only do it because ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Ode to the Imaginary Cat
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! First, I would like to say that I really love cats! I have 5 of them xD I also really liked the format of your poem. It ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part II)
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here yet again for another review! I'm hoping this one will be significantly shorter than the last review I did, as I covered a lot of things in ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with your review! This particular genre isn't really my forte, but I shall do my best! I'll start with grammar. I didn't see too many errors in ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Absolute :: Prologue
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with your review! This is a beautiful start to your novel! I love your use of imagery throughout this prologue. That being said, I would have also ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Elysium - Prologue
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with your review! First, I'd like to say nice title! I just really like that word, I don't know why. It just rolls off the tongue so ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Untitled
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! This was a beautiful poem! That being said, the title doesn't do it justice. It would be a shame for someone to skip over this poem simply ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter II
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with a review for you! You're off to a lovely start with this novel. This chapter is just as intriguing as the last. That being said, I ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: Just Like Heaven
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! First, congrats on making the literary spotlight! Okay, on to the review! I really loved this poem. It was short, yet so sweet. You managed to capture ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: anxiety
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! First, I'd like to say that I have anxiety, so I know how you feel. I love how you portrayed anxiety here and I love your descriptions. ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter I
Hello, InfniteRectangles here! I don't usually review novel chapters, but the title intrigued me, so here I am! Prose isn't really my strong point, but I will do my best. ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: Thunder
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! I really liked this poem! The flow was consistent, it had a nice rhythm to it, and you used lots of imagery. That being said, I did ...
Apr 6, 2016 -
Re: The Most Random 3-Word Each Story To Be Written (Includes gays, exploding dicks, and pinatas!)
O__o What. the hell. Is this? Way to oversexualize lesbians, by the way. As if they don't deal with that enough already. I understand this was meant to be a ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: The Man in the Bed
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! Wow, this was absolutely amazing! I love the imagery and the emotion and just everything about this was beautiful! Reviewing prose really isn't my specialty, I'm more ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: Gabe's Last Race
Hello, InfiniteRectangles here! This is a very sweet poem, but, as Rydia mentioned, the title is a bit unfitting. Titles need to be interesting to capture the attention of your ...
Apr 5, 2016