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  • Poetry » Satire, Romantic Re: Silken Lies

    Hi! Ineedy0u for a review here! Just want to start off with I enjoy this poem, very well thought out. I thought that you did well to condense lots of ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Catching the Silence.

    Okay so let me start off with, hello welcome to the site! Okay now to the review, don't want to discourage you because trust me. . .YOU are a good ...

    Apr 27, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Dear Z.

    First of all I though this was very cute! I think it was supposed to be sad but I just imagined two kids that had a falling out. So far ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Goodbye (depressing)

    I saw you post on my wall and became interested in you as a person. You seemed friendly, but I see that you poetry takes a dark side to them. ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wallet

    Okay so let me start off with a very creative way to start off! So the first error that I saw was, "and his love letter were folded neatly in ...

    Apr 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: I know a girl

    I like the stile of this poem very simple style, easy to read. But I feel as if it's been done before and I thought that she might have died ...

    Apr 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The One Who Wasn't

    First let me say. . . Oh. My. God. That was amazing, I felt like I was there. I might just be in to th3e creepy factor of it but ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: 2016

    I enjoyed thid poem, as it had a lot of inside hurt. However, I thought it was to adult for, "and being her grandfather was his game,". And i did ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Half A Sandwich

    Well first of i thought this was supposed to be funny. . . I was very wrong. I was really conffused in the beginning, but once i kept reading I ...

    Dec 11, 2016


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