Incognito

I actually found this kind of epic in a way. It was easy to relate as a teenager with the intoxication. Now first off, I want to comment on your ...

Bonjour mon ami! First off, I want to talk to you about your grammar. There was a few issues I found within it that you should work on. Many of ...

Allo there. (: I'm Incognito and am going to review your story so far for you. Overall, I find it a very interesting concept. I am from a whole different ...

I have to say, I really did like this piece. (: It has a great voice to it, and the dialogue is not static at all. I was very impressed ...

First off, I want to make a comment to affablearmadillo. You probably have had a hard day, doesnt mean you have to be so mean to the kid. Your comments ...

This is pretty good. I find it quite entertaining because it does connect with the superficial world of highschool. I have a couple things I want to pick out though. ...

Well to be frank, I didnt really enjoy this piece. You wrote it well, certainly, and it appears that everyone above caught all the nit-picks so I wont go through ...

This was a very passionate piece, I have to say that for sure. It was certainly tragic, and I am unsure really what to think of it. You have great ...

Because you commented on my critique I felt like I should take a gander at some of your work. ;) And I have to say I was pleasantly surprised. You ...

I didnt like it. To be honest. I am not trying to be rude or anything. The common thread in your poem was this line; You left her standing Yes, ...

I did indeed enjoy that. I kind of liked the morbid feel of it and you did great with the atmosphere of the whole thing. Over all it appears to ...

Not to sound like a sap or anything, but this actually brought me to tears. I had much the same thing happen to me, though there was a few variances, ...

No offense, but my opinion of this piece is different then the others. I didn't really like it. You have excellent potential. I enjoyed the common thread through the storyline, ...

This reminds me a lot of The Sword of Truth Series by Terry Goodkind. In fact the similarities are astounding, and could get you in trouble with copyright. I recommend ...

I disagree with Jasmine. This story was beautiful, written with stunning imagery and passion beyond the obvious. You didn't have to tell the reader th emotions of him leaving her, ...