Incandescence

Everytime you see a "you" it refers to Grant; "Jeniffer," on the the other hand, is referenced to once. As soon as you read the word, "you," it is safe ...

"you" = Grant (the person for whom this was written) "Jeniffer" = "Jeniffer"

Add the fact that this is out of context and has a terrible plot, and oila, Brad dislikes.

I can't come up with cute little phrases to describe you anymore.

To clarify some of the comments: *Tense changing was, in fact, purposeful. The point was to bring to life a certain aspect of the experience (i.e., the most vivid part.). ...

This is from my personal journal. So I suppose it could just as easily go into "Non-Fiction". Hmm...and yes, "surreality (a poem)" was, in fact, the result of these events.

I think this is "Non-Fiction," and while it is, in fact, good for an English essay, I think you could have extrapolated a few ideas and made it a really ...

It isn't about a girl - it's a religious poem

Unsatisfied with the reviews this poem recieved, Brad shamelessly bumps it back to the top.

I didn't read this. When you post a poem, please make sure the title is grammatically sound. An intentional 'y'all' or 'ain't' I don't mind, but "A evil man" made ...

You seem to have opened a College Introductory Philosophy textbook and randomally placed lines from it and called it a "poem." No. This is not a poem, and I refuse ...

Jack, I still liked it, but it seems like you were just trying to get points with the excessive add-ons. Put them all in the same, original post, and it ...

The last "fell" a pun? I loved this piece; a very lively display of ripping of a person's emotions and ideas and counting factions till you realize it don't matter. ...

I'm sorry. This poem did nothing for me. I'll comment seriously later, though. We moved three gondolas and a 8 or 9 filing cabinets today. So yeah...I'll come back tomorrow ...

And it shall be christened: A Schizophrenic Look at Gothicism.