Published March 20, 2005
He thinks he's the hero and she's the villian,
But he isn't good and pure.
He's really the villian and she's the hero,
He hurts with his evil tricks and mind games.
His stupid ass actions tear her apart piece by piece.
He wants to shelter his kids from the divorce.
But htye really aren't sheltered.
He thinks his kids love him and want to see him,
But they never have loved him.
They remember how he hurt them,
They see how he hurts her,
They know how evil he is,
His actions truly speak louder then any words he could ever utter.
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I didn't read this. When you post a poem, please make sure the title is grammatically sound. An intentional 'y'all' or 'ain't' I don't mind, but "A evil man" made me cringe.
I can feel the anger but it's more because I know the situation, not because of the words and flow.