Incandescence

Jiggity, A poem is told from whomever's perspective you want it to be told from. Don't let the gender of the writer determine the gender of the narrator. All the ...

P.S. Consider: "Vanes and Veins" to "Vanes versus Veins" or some similar switch.

Chevy-- Indeed, I was. I stole the rhythm from a sonnet for that last bit, as you might have noticed. Best, Brad

Snoink, What you should really read is Marx's Das Kapital . Best, Brad

Hey Brian, Long time no see. Good to hear from you again. I suspect most people aren't commenting on this because most aren't reading it because, as you said, it's ...

Thanks for catching those spelling glitches. When I have an idea, grammar and spelling go out the window. =] As for the "thrilled, terrified, thrilled" bit -- I understand the ...

Haha, I posted some more if you're actually still in wanting. This is the first fiction piece I've written -- at least in memory -- not for a class. It ...

I don't mean to offend, but this isn't an emotion. It's a hard fact of life that language fails to describe everything it creates...

I wanna be a rockstar / but I ain't got what it takes. :)

Eric We didn't want to move. It was our father's decision. Texas seemed unbearable. A land where people drifted and had a twang. It was repulsive. I had protested the ...

Nope, heh, that was an honest spelling error.

xantham -- thanks for reading/generous comments. this link may help: best, brad

Hi Chandni, I haven't bought into this poem yet. This is only so-so on its own terms. Its principal fault is that it jumps around bigtime (from space-travel to music) ...

Try using this new thing out (it's totally awesome): we call it a "period," but if you want an even better deal, we've got you a package called "Grammatical Structure."

Pretty, but I didn't see anything to get from the poem. There's nothing really memorable here. I'm going submit this, and tomorrow, I won't even remember what I read.