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Re: Goddess of Time (Part One)
Thanks Ranger! I was originally going to have her like curse him from above or something but i settled for gasped because everything else i did was ammmmazingly cliched. :D
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)
This was really good. What happened to the guy who was following her though? After the guy with grey eyes bumps into her?
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Goddess of Time (Part One)
Thanks everyone! I appreciate the help :D!
Nov 6, 2009 -
Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (14)
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE hurry up and post the next xhapter, I'm dying here!! ^^ :D
Oct 16, 2009 -
Re: A Return to Peace (Chapter One)
Oooh, very interesting. I cannot wait for another chapter. Nicely done. But I don't really know the age of Riss or Robbie. That being said, are they young or old?
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: "Alone" Prologue
Cool
Jun 12, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Well done. :D
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Moving on
Thank you fro the review Eraqio! I understand what you mean about the ending part. I didn't intend for it to be that way, but I'm glad you liked the ...
Mar 27, 2009 -
Re: Moving on
thanx jules! And yes I already have an assignment missing so I can't hand it in, but I definitely will next marking period! :D
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Moving on
Thanks for the critiques guys. :D I would edit it but I'm really tired right peace
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Does the city sleep?
Love it! But you already knew that.... :D
Mar 20, 2009 -
Re: Guardians Prologue and Chapter One
you need at least two reviews before you can post anything
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Awake - Chapter I and II
she is only fifteen. Was she driving?
Dec 31, 2008 -
Re: Cassidy (Part 2)
Hey tn, I liked how you started the second half of this, but I think you should've described more how she was feeling. Was she nervous, relaxed, or ready to ...
Dec 29, 2008 -
Re: Edgar Allan Poe (revised completely)
I told you in school that I liked both of them, but now I see the difference. I love version 2! :D -Moony
Dec 24, 2008