Ikrantsyip

No-one is alone. Where do I start? the first thing I can say is that it's a beautifully written poem, with a strong theme through-out. it definitely communicates how you ...

I hate to repeat what others are saying, but I agree with Pencillia. this reminds me more of a war than an actual video game. though I it makes sense ...

a (not quite, but still) inspiration poem sending a message across of an issue that must be noticed. A horror that this is a common occurrence. beautiful words bringing to ...

the creativity that is clearly apparent in your use of constant stops, hesitation, and uncountable spaces and gaps make this poem something different. not the funnest things to read, but ...

wonderful poem. it was very well written I enjoyed reading it and experiencing it. many people can relate to this poem through personal experience which they always have become more ...

my little itty bitty note is this: the third line of the first paragraph "With the loneliness that oozes from their mangled forms on buildings, roads, walls." it should be: ...

I can't say anything that hasn't already been said unfortunately, only repeat it. ChocalateCello's quote: One thing though- "...your mind once filled with such beautiful..." Should be "...your mind, o

I absolutely adored this poem. a war of words couldn't have said it better myself. yours is the poetry I try to master myself after. no improvements need be made ...