Ignatius5453

I didnt get the purpose of the poem, it was all over the place, like it had no set structure or topic, you went from pee to coffee to time ...

I absolutely loved it, like, I dont even know how to describe it. It wasnt too deep, but it wasnt too shallow and about nothing. It was quaint and cute ...

I completely disagree, writing poetry without rhyme is not playing with the net down, it's more like walking around with no gravity, no boundaries. Now then, to review your poem. ...

Well, I'm not in the mood to nitpick right now, but I felt the poem was going nowhere. I hate that I'm going to sound mean, but the poem was ...

Well, it was good. I can't say it was a masterpiece, but ti wasn't bad either. I liked the emotion of the poem, but the wording was shaky and vague ...

I would make a few nitpicks but Im not in the mood, too lazy at this moment. All I will say is it doesnt quite flow, a lot of starts ...

Well, the nitpicker(s) above did a good job, I only skimmed through their nitpicking to see if they took anything I would say, and well... they stole all my critiques, ...

You might want to change "You build your walls" To: "You buil t your walls" I loved the entire thing. The big wall of text that came in the middle ...

Well, well, well. I didnt like it at all it was just sooo.... great! I loved it! I felt the emotion, some lines were awkwardly worded and the rhythm of ...

Interesting piece, the rhythm was a little awkward, but the subject matter was good, I read all the way through about 5 times because it was so entertaining. It could ...

Amelia did an awesome job critiquing you, I can't really add anything else to it. But apart from what she said I didnt like how your rhyme scheme was ABCDB, ...

I liked it except there was one little thing you can change. As sure as the light shines , there will be darkness again, As sure as the sun shines ...

It was interesting, very interesting. It took a few reads through to get it fully, and the parenthesis slowed me down. But it was very well done, I can honestly ...

I laughed out loud at this one. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. It caught my eye because it sounds like something they would ask on an entrance application or interview, ...

I loved this, I felt the pain and the longing, it was great. And I like the signature too. Im a huge William Blake fan, my favorite one of his ...