Ignatius5453

Blunt, short and simple. To the point, concise. Blah, blah, blah. Hell, I liked it. It was easy to read and entertaining. There is a lot of truth in your ...

Toads that hop along the road A Are squashed by tires as they go. B There are far too many, after all, C Do your best to squash some more. ...

Great job! my favorite part was: My work is done The water runs To rinse me of my past To be reused For different hues The old ones cannot last ...

The lyrics were okay, for me to get a good idea of how this song is supposed to sound, you have to propose a beat, some music to go with ...

I liked how you wrote it. Jumping back and forth got a little getting used to, and I had to read it through again just to make sure I could ...

Like a phantom ghost coming out at night, so pale, so frightning, so very white, watching you with it's hollow eyes, nothing lives there, nothing survives. Good job, I love ...

Everything has a weakness. If you have no weakness, if you are invincible, then you are nothing. And nothing can survive forever. Great job, I loved this part especially. In ...

I loved it. My friend's mom died just and I dont really know how he feels, but I feel really bad, I cant imaging losing someone like that when she's ...

like a c h ameleon i change color instantly.. wasting my life for lusts makes the insanity.. This line could use a little revision, maybe make it more concise still ...

Great job! I liked the poem idea. And completely agree, life seems to go by so fast. Im only 15, but still life seems to be ticking away. Im going ...

It took me a little to figure out how to read it so it had the right rhythm, but I really enjoyed it. My favorite part was: "Yet you had ...

Well, seeing as you already have 2 extremely long reviews for these poems already, Ill spare you from having to read another one. I pretty much agree with the first ...

The first one really conveyed a message, the edited one drew a picture where the the message was erased, it would be cool if you could find a happy medium, ...

So 2 people like absolutely long and boring poems, unless of course theyre not boring. Those two hated the fact that the poem was short and they couldnt write a ...

I liked the chorus a lot, but the first stanza's rhythm was a little off I had to pause between a few syllables, you might want to count those out ...