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Thank you! The italics also differentiate who wrote what part. :D Thanks for catching the type o!

Nix and I are attempting it. We're on there. You'll find us easily. :D Good luck all!

...............*is completely speechless* This makes me want to hug you even more. I hope your call is answered.

Thanks Lava. I definitely have to go back and edit this.

Thank you!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D so can I...:D

Yay! I was afraid I didn't get the sweetness quite right in the second one!

Ok, I would love to hear you sing it. Thanks for the review though. It was helpful!

This is good. I think it's supposed to be "Rome's collapse" though. I think this should be "telling of the blind". I like this part "In the asylum of the ...

Thank you for the review Tenyo. I posted this chapter unedited, so that's why there's so much dialouge in it. The reason it's so hard to sum up is because ...

Thank you for the review Skins! Still not enough description? :( I thought I got that down. :( thanks for pointing it out!:)

Ha, ha! This is great! I love how you managed to make all the names make sense! :D

Can you put periods at the end of your sentences please. It's bothering me.

Thank you Shubhi! I will keep that in mind. I might hold off editing this until December because that's when I have vacation.

I would if I knew what it was myself...I think it was distance...time and numerous other factors I don't know the names for...:(