Icefire63111

Really well written, really thought out. However, Wouldn't She try to take control of the wheel if her mother was driving drunk? Perhaps Nichole grabbed the wheel in and effort ...

Holy............ That was......... I'm speechless! *recovers* Characters Kassie - Sorry, I can't imagine someone doing that to thier best friend's Boyfriend. However, if kassie Really is that Bitchy,

Since Jospeh (spelling?) has already nit-picked for you, I'll do Characters/Plot. Characters Overall, your characters are great. Ellen- Ellen is...deep. She sees past Jonah's diease enough to like him

Wow. I don't even know what to say about this. It has left me speechless. This song format reminded me of "Waking the Demon" By Bullet For My Valintime, But, ...

niccy_v: In your own words, "this is brilliant!" It really is! I have a probelm with this sentance, however. “Good, just keep responding to me and we’ll be firm friends, ...

hi! Starting with editing right away, since its Tuesday! Quote: She scooped up a two cookies and dumped them on a plate. I belive it should be "two cookies" That ...

This is a great poem Cbwriterchick! I just have a question : (this being my first poetry review and that I am a horrible poet.) The lines at the begining ...

Bad girl! Bad girl! You broke the most important rule of all: You told us, you didn’t show us: Quote: he was too sad about his mother, who was slowly ...

Ha! I found this poem hilarous! Just one thing : "Because everyone is an Edward-Cullen-Loving-Zombie" That line is a tad to long. try spitting it up: "Because everyone is an ...

Have you ever met a person that is so annoying that when you hear their voice all you want to do is wring their neck? That`s a great way to ...

I really liked this poem!!!! However there werea a few mistakes that need correcting. "It’s killing me, It’s pain." the first line is okay, however the second line is not. ...

Creativity is taken away, Work is given everyday, Imagination is cruelly slain. Regurgitation of information reigns. Individuality runs through my veins. I want to escape. That was my favorite part ...

To start - the story flowed nicely-no clunkiness at all! Second: Julis seems like an emotionless blob. He doesn`t seem to have any thought, any feelings, anything! Third: The horse ...

ok, I really like this as a song. I just wish I could have heard the beat, because without it it seems more like a poem than a song. (Sorry, ...

Love it! They only problem was that you start off saying it`s a kingdom...then its a pleasant village..... I haven`t heard a narrator with that much voice for awhile. Great ...