Iamnotperfect

I think I will try to expand more on the poem. Thank you :)

Thank you for the comments. I do apologize for the structure of the poem but I wrote it as soon as I had the thought. I will have to definitely ...

Hello, thanks for the constructive comments. By "jump between their wings" I was referring to my parents because that is what most children associate their parents with; love and affection ...

Hi, I do apologize for the spelling mistakes, after all I wrote the poem in the moment as you can see but I really appreciate the comment; also when I ...

Hi, I like this poem, is simple and descriptive :)

Hello, thanks for the reviews I'll take your advices in consideration and Sassykat your interpretation of my poem is exactly what I meant :)

This is so original and I would so not feel bored to read it again and again, just simply hilarious haha. Good work :)

Thank you

Well I don't really have much to add to the above review. All I want to say is that the poem flows nicely for me however there is a part ...

Thanks for the constructive review Lauraxc, I'll surely try to improve it :-)

thank you :-)

Hi, I don't know how to define this but one thing is for sure ... I keep on coming back to it because it's just so much humor !!! :D

Hi thanks everyone for your help ... all your suggestions were good but for some reason this is the title that was most imprinted in my mind :) As everyone ...

Hi, thanks for the reviews. PaperNessa ... sorry I meant armor, the problem is that I speak Italian where you translate armor into "armatura" I am now assuming that you ...

Hi Thanks for the useful comments and grammar nitpicks, I always forget to proofread :) ... About the poem I just wanted to express the fact that ignorance doesn't just ...