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Re: Better Things: Chapter 26: Ben Again
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicking Time! I’m a little... confused. Did Juno... visit... me? Juno... blind, pretty, smart, funny... love... I remember. Thought I heard... her voice. And some..
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Bring me somewhere nice...
Heeeeey! IamTraunt here to review for my oh so marveloso bud. (Hee hee, see what I did there?) My favourite line: Bring me somewhere nice, When our loved ones never ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Hold Steady
Hey! IamTraunt, your Marvel buddy here. Am I creeping you out? Because, yes, I am reviewing your works. Mwhahahahaha. Ahem. Okay, like Royal said, I can't pick a certain meaning. ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: .
Haha, the end bit made me laugh: The thing that caught me about the book was the dedication: This book is dedicated to ugly ducklings everywhere./ Don't worry about those ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: People in the park.
Hey! IamTraunt here! So, I did my research: a humorous, frequently bawdy, verse of three long and two short lines rhyming aabba I find this short, but quote witty. You ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Crossroads
Hey! IamTraunt here to... Talk? Um, comment I guess :-D Okay, this is what my bible says, lets compare shall we: This is what He says: “Stand at the crossroads ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Star Wars Fan-Fic
Therese... I am IamTraunt... And I am your reviewer! ... Mwhahahahahahaha. Okay, so I'm here to review like I said I would. I am catching you up Nitpicks! He pushed ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Wind Chimes
Hey, your buddy Traunt here to review - like I said I would . Okay, so its Pokemon Review Day and I haven't used any of the tips that they ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Antagonism & Howitzers & Egomania To Blood
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! I love the use of your vocabulary. Its incredible. Antagonism - active hostility or opposition. Egomania - Egomania also known as an obsessive preoccupation with ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The darkness
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. I remember I first started here. Just a few corrections: I wasn’t quite sure what was happeningto me. 'Happening' ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: I will publish characters!
Firstly, it should be 'publishing' and secondly, this is a writing society, not a ranting society. You should really take into consideration that there are young writers on here, some ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: A While Later... (a.k.a. Chapter 2)
Hey! IamTraunt here to review! So, I'm sorry that I haven't read the first chapter, so I may be a little rusty, but I will try my best to understand ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Pixie And The Giant (Part 1)
Hey, jazzydracula! IamTraunt here to review! Okay... On with the corrections! :D Nitpicking Time! Chrysanthemum let out a sigh, held her breath and dived head first into the puddle. Now, ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Chapter four: Hunters
IamTraunt here to review! Nitpicking Time! The stink wasn’t unbearable; it wasn’t even the plain, usual stink of feces, and there were much of it down there, without a doubt. ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Trying: Chapter 3.2
Hey! IamTraunt here to review, O' Poet Master! Nitpicking Time! They had been done with me. I feel as if something is missing from this sentence. You tell us in ...
Jul 26, 2014
