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The poem had a great deal of emotion which was great.But here is some constructive criticism you might want to explain more of whats was good but I know you ...

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The poem is a vary good read.But you might not want to post poetry that maybe a littel close to home.

Your poetry was vary thought out and expressive.But you need to make it flow better and make sure you put more feeling into the emotion you are expressing in your ...

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