HostofHorus

Hey niteowl, Thanks for the review. I think you're probably right about the imagery. These were some fragments I wrote when I was concerned that telling a really good friend ...

Sorry, I forgot to press review on it :S

Thanks so much! :) And as to your last statement, if only this were a work of humor :P

Glad it could be of use!

Ah! I understand :) Poetry classes can be tough sometimes with some of the constraints they have you work with. Hope some of my comments were worthwhile though!

You always seem so confident in my chances with her :P

Thanks! I shortened that so that the the rhythm would work a little better. I felt like with the abbreviated "and" it would help push readers into the next word ...

I will echo Divergent by Veronica Roth, just finished it, loved it. I also really enjoyed 13 Reasons Why, and before i fall. :)

I'll keep my review as short as you piece. It was funny, I liked it, And that is all I have to say. ~HostofHorus :D

Hmmm.... The Haymitch thing is interesting. I have to say I agree with you there. The love triangle I didn't care so much about because I really didn't feel like ...

I actually kind of sort of love that. :) It fits into the poem and it does bring in the love aspect in a nice way. I say keep it!

Haha alright, I guess I should explain a bit. This was pretty much fully satire. We were given a prompt in english that was "The scariest thing I've ever done...." ...

Ooo, is Stephen King good? I have heard a lot of good words about him, but I never have read a book of his. What are some of his best?

Hmmm, well I can see your reasoning there, and I won't argue against it. I don't believe I have read quite enough of his work to make much comment. All ...

Haha, why is that?