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Re: Amor
thanks NightWriter! I'm mostly freanch but my ancestry is really wacked so I've made it my goal to learn all of the languages my extended family speaks. Since most of ...
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Amor
Thanks so much. And thank your brother for me as well, please.
Dec 16, 2011 -
Re: Amor
Never mind the spoiler, here's the English version: Love What is love? Is it the look a mother gives her child, Or the look a husband gives his wife? Is ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P--part 4
What I mostly saw were grammar errors, and even though there were a lot of the they were mostly just that you didn't capitalize something you needed to. Good job!
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter One
Wow this is pretty good. I'm really enjoyed reading it.
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Rushing By
Okay, I liked this poem, but there is one problem. You neef to make a dession regarding your rhyme pattern. That's all I could fijd wrong, so good job!
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Turns Into
This is amazing. The emotion that you put into this piece is incredible. Well done.
May 26, 2011 -
Re: The Book
It's supposed to feel kind of rigid, that's just how I felt it should be.
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Warning signs your date is broke
These are so funny! I love them! Did you come up with them on your own?
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Lullaby
You're really talented. I liked this. I showed it to my cousin, and she says to thank you for writing such an acurate description of what she and other teen ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 4
Just one question, why didn't her parents flip out when he came home?
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Didn't see any grmmar or spelling mistakes, loved to topic and the poem. You're making my job as a reviewer hard, but that's good. Shows how talented you are as ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: The Effect
Ok, I see a lot of grammar mistakes here. But, I read Icyflame's review, and she seemed to have pointed out every thing that I saw. With a little work, ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: In just a few years
In all truth, yes I have been to a senior prom. My gay cousin took me last year.
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: deleted
No spelling mistakes, no grammar mistakes, I loved the topic, and there's really nothing else to say. Damn you are making this job of reviewing so hard.
Apr 5, 2011
