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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Amor

    thanks NightWriter! I'm mostly freanch but my ancestry is really wacked so I've made it my goal to learn all of the languages my extended family speaks. Since most of ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Amor

    Thanks so much. And thank your brother for me as well, please.

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Amor

    Never mind the spoiler, here's the English version: Love What is love? Is it the look a mother gives her child, Or the look a husband gives his wife? Is ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P--part 4

    What I mostly saw were grammar errors, and even though there were a lot of the they were mostly just that you didn't capitalize something you needed to. Good job!

    Aug 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: A Day They Would Never Forget: Chapter One

    Wow this is pretty good. I'm really enjoyed reading it.

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rushing By

    Okay, I liked this poem, but there is one problem. You neef to make a dession regarding your rhyme pattern. That's all I could fijd wrong, so good job!

    May 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Turns Into

    This is amazing. The emotion that you put into this piece is incredible. Well done.

    May 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Book

    It's supposed to feel kind of rigid, that's just how I felt it should be.

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Warning signs your date is broke

    These are so funny! I love them! Did you come up with them on your own?

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lullaby

    You're really talented. I liked this. I showed it to my cousin, and she says to thank you for writing such an acurate description of what she and other teen ...

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 4

    Just one question, why didn't her parents flip out when he came home?

    Apr 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do not click this.

    Didn't see any grmmar or spelling mistakes, loved to topic and the poem. You're making my job as a reviewer hard, but that's good. Shows how talented you are as ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Effect

    Ok, I see a lot of grammar mistakes here. But, I read Icyflame's review, and she seemed to have pointed out every thing that I saw. With a little work, ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In just a few years

    In all truth, yes I have been to a senior prom. My gay cousin took me last year.

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: deleted

    No spelling mistakes, no grammar mistakes, I loved the topic, and there's really nothing else to say. Damn you are making this job of reviewing so hard.

    Apr 5, 2011


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