HorriBliss

[I clicked post accidentally, a review is coming, bear with me!]

Thank you, I'm just practising and I wasn't sticking to the conventions, any way. I appreciate your feedback, and I'll take it on board, thank you!

'Dark space' taken as literal would perhaps be wrong, but this isn't necessarily the case here. The 'dark space' in one reading could refer to the ulterior meaning of death/depression/anxiety/angst, ...

Both reviewers seemed to have picked up on the odd use of "In" in the last line. One of the interpretations of the poem is depression: "In" would refer to ...

I liked it for what it was: a short, fun, and humorous anecdote. However, I think it trailed off toward the end, and it started to become a little stale ...

Hey, Trident, just passing through to let you know that Mr. Murray here is a personal friend of mine, and he asked me to post the poem yesternight for him. ...

No problem at all stranger, thanks for laughing (it made me giggle when writing it, so ya-huh that was one of my goals - glad I succeeded!) I've got a ...

Yep, your review did help, actually. I wasn't even sure about what the piece was, but I just liked the character when I was writing him so thought that I'd ...

Your review made me smile, and it was indeed helpful, thank you very much. I'm gonna go ahead and re-write and re-submit this piece. I never intended to, but I ...

Haha, this made me giggle, well done! Although it seems Karzkin just went all technical on your ass, so I'm off to view her/his linked forum post!

I never thought about that but you do have a point. I'll take that into consideration and perhaps re-draft this piece, or if I include this chap in any future ...

Duly noted, I'll go and correct them now. Thanks for the review, I really do appreciate it!

No problem at all, just trying to give back to the community :) Don't forget that editing or rewriting is just as important as creating: Interviewer: 'How much rewriting do ...

Oops, apologies for the top 2 lines of this review, I meant to delete them xD

Thank you for your review :) The last paragraph was my favourite too, I'm pretty sure it's because it flows so well, with 4 end-rhymes. The last couplet I had ...