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Re: The Art of Deception.
Hello, and welcome to the site! I hope you’re having a great day or night! This was a fascinating read, covered head-to-toe in fun figurative language and stunning word choice. ...
Jan 17, 2023 -
Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 8
Hello! I hope you’re having an excellent day/night! As mentioned in my last review, it really is so great to see you back at this again! And let me tell ...
Jan 14, 2023 -
Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 7
Hi! I hope you're having a great start to the New Year! It was very exciting to see you update this work, as I had really enjoyed the previous chapters! ...
Jan 13, 2023 -
Re: LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.1
Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night thus far! This made for an excellent opening chapter. It didn’t start too quickly, but it gave the reader a ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: This Is My Mood (Colors)
Hello! I hope you are having a great day or night! This poem was brilliant, and the end had me smiling from ear to ear! It's so earnest and thoughtful, ...
Dec 13, 2022 -
Re: Diana’s story
Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! I initially read through this without going back to reread 'Merry Xmas' and 'The Chriselle Family,' and was, at first, ...
Nov 26, 2022 -
Re: e
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Right away, your title caught my eye. I was immediately impressed by the formatting of this piece as well. ...
Nov 25, 2022 -
Re: The Stupendous and Amazing Laughing Jack Song!
Hello! Happy Review Month, I hope you’re having a great day or night : ) I admire the inspiration behind this song. Aside from what I’ve read from you, I’ve ...
Sep 24, 2022 -
Re: Burning Skies - 2 - Alastair
Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night! I found this opening to be stronger than the previous chapter. Right off the bat, I’m immediately hooked with questions. ...
Sep 24, 2022 -
Re: Burning Skies - 1 - Ilya
Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night! Right off the bat, you jump straight into an action sequence. There was a ton to like about it! I ...
Sep 24, 2022 -
Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 1.1
Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! Alright, straight off the bat, I loved this! It was such a fun and exciting start to the story that ...
Sep 21, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Ten, pt 3
Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! At the end of your chapter, you asked whether or not the "Old Stuff" was getting excessive or grating. To ...
Sep 17, 2022 -
Re: LMV VI: The Colour of Dandelions - Chapter 1.1
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I loved how you formatted this piece. The countdown gave your story a sense of urgency, one that started ...
Sep 16, 2022 -
Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I’ve come to really enjoy reading your lyrics/poetry. It reminds me a bit of being hit over the head ...
Sep 14, 2022 -
Re: There Was Once A Girl Uglier Than The Wind
Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! Pardon the personal story here, but in my writing class the other day, we actually talked about Ernest Hemingways piece ...
Sep 14, 2022
