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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Art of Deception.

    Hello, and welcome to the site! I hope you’re having a great day or night! This was a fascinating read, covered head-to-toe in fun figurative language and stunning word choice. ...

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 8

    Hello! I hope you’re having an excellent day/night! As mentioned in my last review, it really is so great to see you back at this again! And let me tell ...

    Jan 14, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 7

    Hi! I hope you're having a great start to the New Year! It was very exciting to see you update this work, as I had really enjoyed the previous chapters! ...

    Jan 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: LMS VI: Silver and Silk 1.1

    Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night thus far! This made for an excellent opening chapter. It didn’t start too quickly, but it gave the reader a ...

    Dec 18, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Is My Mood (Colors)

    Hello! I hope you are having a great day or night! This poem was brilliant, and the end had me smiling from ear to ear! It's so earnest and thoughtful, ...

    Dec 13, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Diana’s story

    Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! I initially read through this without going back to reread 'Merry Xmas' and 'The Chriselle Family,' and was, at first, ...

    Nov 26, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: e

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Right away, your title caught my eye. I was immediately impressed by the formatting of this piece as well. ...

    Nov 25, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The Stupendous and Amazing Laughing Jack Song!

    Hello! Happy Review Month, I hope you’re having a great day or night : ) I admire the inspiration behind this song. Aside from what I’ve read from you, I’ve ...

    Sep 24, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Burning Skies - 2 - Alastair

    Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night! I found this opening to be stronger than the previous chapter. Right off the bat, I’m immediately hooked with questions. ...

    Sep 24, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Burning Skies - 1 - Ilya

    Hello! I hope you’re having a good day or night! Right off the bat, you jump straight into an action sequence. There was a ton to like about it! I ...

    Sep 24, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: (LMSVI) The Ruptured Shadow, Chapter 1.1

    Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! Alright, straight off the bat, I loved this! It was such a fun and exciting start to the story that ...

    Sep 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Ten, pt 3

    Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! At the end of your chapter, you asked whether or not the "Old Stuff" was getting excessive or grating. To ...

    Sep 17, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: LMV VI: The Colour of Dandelions - Chapter 1.1

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I loved how you formatted this piece. The countdown gave your story a sense of urgency, one that started ...

    Sep 16, 2022
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Who cares? (Gabriel’s loneliness)

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I’ve come to really enjoy reading your lyrics/poetry. It reminds me a bit of being hit over the head ...

    Sep 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: There Was Once A Girl Uglier Than The Wind

    Hello! I hope you're having a good day or night! Pardon the personal story here, but in my writing class the other day, we actually talked about Ernest Hemingways piece ...

    Sep 14, 2022


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