Horisun

Hi! I hope you're having a good day thus far! Jumping straight in, the tone of this piece really caught my attention. We quickly get a sense for the narrator's ...

Hello, welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you find it well here! The way you write prose has a very lyrical intonation. It contributes a sense of whimsy ...

Hello, Happy Review Day! I hope you’re having a great one thus far! First off, the descriptions through out this chapter are very, very strong! This whole work felt extremely ...

Good morning, and Happy Review Day! I hope you’re having a great one thus far! I read and reviewed the first iteration of this work, and thoroughly enjoyed it, so ...

Hello, and happy Review Day! I hope you’re having a good one! I really enjoyed reading through this chapter, as well as the last! The dialogue between the characters was ...

Hello! I hope you’re having a great day or night! I wasn’t expecting a story based on Greek or Roman mythology, but it’s always a pleasant surprise! I didn’t know ...

Hello! I hope you're doing well today! First off, I loved this as a prologue. I'm contradicting the prior reviewer here, but I don't think it would work anywhere near ...

Hello! Happy Review Day, and belated welcome to the site. I hope you're doing well! These were some strong opening chapters! You did an excellent job introducing the setting and ...

Hello! Happy Review Day, I hope you're doing well! This story is heart wrenching. It starts by establishing Andrea's cold reality, then drifts into her fantasy, and ends with a ...

Somehow, you've managed to make me like Alainna, lol. You did a good job pitting her against a guy who is somehow even less bearable than she! Alainna is arrogant, ...

Hello! Welcome to the Young Writers Society, I hope you're doing well! This was a great story with a tight moral. I really enjoyed the simplicity of it, and it ...

Hello! Happy Review Day, I hope you're doing well! Straight away, this piece had excellent pacing. I loved how quickly this escalated, and the man's final moments were particularly effective. ...

Ay, another Wings of Fire fan! It's always good to see! I hope you're having a good Review Day so far :D Silver's abilities are very interesting, and something I ...

Hello, and happy Review Day! I hope you're having a good night! I went back to read the last couple chapters, and thought to myself, man, this is super good, ...

Hello! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! If you have questions about anything at all, please feel free to reach out! This story starts at a breakneck pace. Right away, ...