Horisun

Hello! I hope you're having a good afternoon! I really enjoyed the stage motif of this poem. You do a lot of really cool, unique things with it. I particularly ...

Hi! I hope you're having a good day thus far! Jumping straight in, the tone of this piece really caught my attention. We quickly get a sense for the narrator's ...

Hello, welcome to the Young Writers Society! I hope you find it well here! The way you write prose has a very lyrical intonation. It contributes a sense of whimsy ...

Hello, Happy Review Day! I hope you’re having a great one thus far! First off, the descriptions through out this chapter are very, very strong! This whole work felt extremely ...

Good morning, and Happy Review Day! I hope you’re having a great one thus far! I read and reviewed the first iteration of this work, and thoroughly enjoyed it, so ...

Hello, and happy Review Day! I hope you’re having a good one! I really enjoyed reading through this chapter, as well as the last! The dialogue between the characters was ...

Hello! I hope you’re having a great day or night! I wasn’t expecting a story based on Greek or Roman mythology, but it’s always a pleasant surprise! I didn’t know ...

Hello! I hope you're doing well today! First off, I loved this as a prologue. I'm contradicting the prior reviewer here, but I don't think it would work anywhere near ...

Hello! Happy Review Day, and belated welcome to the site. I hope you're doing well! These were some strong opening chapters! You did an excellent job introducing the setting and ...

Hello! Happy Review Day, I hope you're doing well! This story is heart wrenching. It starts by establishing Andrea's cold reality, then drifts into her fantasy, and ends with a ...

Somehow, you've managed to make me like Alainna, lol. You did a good job pitting her against a guy who is somehow even less bearable than she! Alainna is arrogant, ...

Hello! Welcome to the Young Writers Society, I hope you're doing well! This was a great story with a tight moral. I really enjoyed the simplicity of it, and it ...

Hello! Happy Review Day, I hope you're doing well! Straight away, this piece had excellent pacing. I loved how quickly this escalated, and the man's final moments were particularly effective. ...

Ay, another Wings of Fire fan! It's always good to see! I hope you're having a good Review Day so far :D Silver's abilities are very interesting, and something I ...

Hello, and happy Review Day! I hope you're having a good night! I went back to read the last couple chapters, and thought to myself, man, this is super good, ...