Horisun

This short story is wonderful, as it brings a terrible problem to peoples notice... Fish abuse. It is horrible about how cruel society is to poor, innocent fish. This short ...

Lol, this was hilarious! Though I do agree with @yoyou446 about it not being hypothetical. Also, I was a little confused that it was the teacher who turned into a ...

This poem was really good! I loved the ending, that was perfect! I can relate to this poem a lot. I do think that the "My parents aren't home" part ...

This was a really nice poem! I feel there were a little to many "Oh Bothers" Which makes it feel repetitive, and at the end, the second to last line ...

This is absolutely amazing! I love it! The last line made me giggle, for some reason. The only thing I'd like to say is when you said nuts than coconuts, ...

Oh, wow, that was great! I loved the twist at the end! I was expecting some heartbreaking, crying out, fearful, poem about a false god, or something, but no... This ...

Thanks for making me dread going to High School! XD Great short story, it made me smile! I loved the start when you compared all his tasks to heroes from ...

Woah, this is creepily interesting. I didn't expect what I got! It's really good, and seems to have a good set up. However, I find that it's a little inconsistent ...

Nooo. My binge is over!! Ah well, at least I'm caught up now! This was a really nice chapter that mended the relationship between Julia and her Grams. I loved ...

Plot twist!! I knew she was trying to tell Julia something, I just knew it! This was a really great chapter, and I was on the edge of my seat ...

Wait... Carter said he had sisters? Must've missed that part... Oops. Overall, this was an amazing chapter, I love how you mentioned Coco! That was really sweet! The riding scene ...

Hey, Liberty! This chapter was great. Not much to say, really. I think the flows really improved since the first few chapters! Which is awesome! And also just when I ...

Great chapter! Also, PLOT TWIST!!! I loved the flow of this chapter, and I love that Carter asked Julia if Izzy and Tim were in her room. I laughed out ...

Okay, I think this is one of your best chapters in this series so far! All the drama! XD I only saw the occasional grammar mistake, and other than that, ...

This is a really nice chapter! I'm very intrigued by the necklace. My personal theory is that it's her moms, and her grandma and her didn't get along. That's my ...