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Re: The Letter to the Guide (Part 3)
Hello! Sorry I'm getting to this so late. I hope you are having a good day or night! I think I might have mentioned this in previous reviews, but I ...
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Re: Alexander and Mallory stories
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Straight off the back, I actually really adore the concept for this story. The ghost hunters add a neat ...
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Re: Poor Amy..
Hi! I hope you are having a great day or night, whenever you may be reading this! There were a couple things about this that stuck out to me right ...
Aug 17, 2022 -
Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 3
Afternoon! I saw your work in the Green Room, and was thoroughly impressed with both this, and the previous two chapters. Quite frankly, I found myself far more invested in ...
Aug 17, 2022 -
Re: How curious..
Hey! It's been a minute since I reviewed one of your works. I saw it sitting in the Green Room and thought I'd leave a quick review! If I'm not ...
Aug 9, 2022 -
Re: An Almost-Sonnet: Table for Two
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I really quite enjoyed this poem. Despite its down to earth nature, your descriptions drew me into a tale ...
Aug 9, 2022 -
Re: The Letter to the Guide - Chapter 2
Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! First off, when I was looking for something to read/review in the greenroom, your title immediately caught my eye, ...
Jun 26, 2022 -
Re: Well this mission went...well it happened
Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! I think by far my favorite part of this story is your world-building. It's so subtle, but reading it, ...
Jun 21, 2022 -
Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.1 [old]
Hiya! I hope you are having a good night! (Or morning, or afternoon, whenever you happen to read this) Right away I wanna say that I particularly enjoyed the interaction ...
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: Annabelle-Lee’s past
Hi! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! Right off the bat, your introduction gave me chills. I loved the interaction between Annabelle and her father, where ...
Jun 7, 2022 -
Re: Ryan’s story-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies
Hello! I hope you're having a wonderful day or night! This was a rather short story, though brimmed with lots of potential. I've noticed that with a lot of your ...
Jun 5, 2022 -
Re: Unfinished Business
Hello and good afternoon! Before I get into this, I should say that I'm no expert in regard to screenplay, so most of my compliments and criticism may stay at ...
Jun 4, 2022 -
Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight
Hello and good evening! I hope you are having a fantastic night! First off, I'm glad that you asked how the descriptions were in this chapter, because I was already ...
Jun 4, 2022 -
Re: Prologue: A done deal
Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! First things first, that introduction was killer! (Pun absolutely intended) The line " I can’t see my sister through ...
Jun 2, 2022 -
Re: Untitled Short Story Part 2
It's terribly poetic that Sophie must learn to make decisions for herself, only to be possessed by a ghost long dead! Dreadfully dark, too, and I'm living for it! (Also, ...
Jun 2, 2022
