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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Letter to the Guide (Part 3)

    Hello! Sorry I'm getting to this so late. I hope you are having a good day or night! I think I might have mentioned this in previous reviews, but I ...

    Aug 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Other, Fantasy Re: Alexander and Mallory stories

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! Straight off the back, I actually really adore the concept for this story. The ghost hunters add a neat ...

    Aug 18, 2022
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Poor Amy..

    Hi! I hope you are having a great day or night, whenever you may be reading this! There were a couple things about this that stuck out to me right ...

    Aug 17, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: It ended at Midnight -Chapter 3

    Afternoon! I saw your work in the Green Room, and was thoroughly impressed with both this, and the previous two chapters. Quite frankly, I found myself far more invested in ...

    Aug 17, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: How curious..

    Hey! It's been a minute since I reviewed one of your works. I saw it sitting in the Green Room and thought I'd leave a quick review! If I'm not ...

    Aug 9, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: An Almost-Sonnet: Table for Two

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night! I really quite enjoyed this poem. Despite its down to earth nature, your descriptions drew me into a tale ...

    Aug 9, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Letter to the Guide - Chapter 2

    Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! First off, when I was looking for something to read/review in the greenroom, your title immediately caught my eye, ...

    Jun 26, 2022
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Well this mission went...well it happened

    Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! I think by far my favorite part of this story is your world-building. It's so subtle, but reading it, ...

    Jun 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Conqueror Rising: Chapter 1.1 [old]

    Hiya! I hope you are having a good night! (Or morning, or afternoon, whenever you happen to read this) Right away I wanna say that I particularly enjoyed the interaction ...

    Jun 8, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Annabelle-Lee’s past

    Hi! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! Right off the bat, your introduction gave me chills. I loved the interaction between Annabelle and her father, where ...

    Jun 7, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Ryan’s story-Clowns,Magic,Murder and Lies

    Hello! I hope you're having a wonderful day or night! This was a rather short story, though brimmed with lots of potential. I've noticed that with a lot of your ...

    Jun 5, 2022
  • Script » Humor, Supernatural Re: Unfinished Business

    Hello and good afternoon! Before I get into this, I should say that I'm no expert in regard to screenplay, so most of my compliments and criticism may stay at ...

    Jun 4, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Fallen King: Chapter Eight

    Hello and good evening! I hope you are having a fantastic night! First off, I'm glad that you asked how the descriptions were in this chapter, because I was already ...

    Jun 4, 2022
  • Art » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Prologue: A done deal

    Hello! I hope you are having a wonderful day or night! First things first, that introduction was killer! (Pun absolutely intended) The line " I can’t see my sister through ...

    Jun 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Untitled Short Story Part 2

    It's terribly poetic that Sophie must learn to make decisions for herself, only to be possessed by a ghost long dead! Dreadfully dark, too, and I'm living for it! (Also, ...

    Jun 2, 2022


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