Hopkin

I cried at the end...*sniff* very heart wrenching~ I can't fathom to you how amazing, and hurt that made me feel. That means you did a dang good job! Yeah ...

OH...MY...GOODNESS! XD As I was reading this, I felt like this was most definitely your category in writing! You did it all so well. The only thing that I didn't ...

Oh my gosh!!! This was so good! I haven't been on here for a while, and coming back by reading this?! I felt like I wanted to read more! I ...

Okay real sorry for not responding been real busy! You know how life is sometimes. ;) Anyway let me tell you that I really enjoyed this!!! And I like it, ...

Hey what up?! This is pretty good! So I'm pretty hooked, it did get a little boring and started to feel like a journal, like all the things she did ...

Hey!! Sorry about the whole thing before, sending you a pm. anyway! the story was AWSOME! you did such a good job this time, better! well you know some things ...

Wow! hello again! that was sooooo good! At first I thought oh it's so long, but hen I got so into it, I lOVED IT! Oh I couldn't help it! ...

Hi! again~ Okay, this sounds like a really good story! awesom! Okay, so there were misspelled words. which I think you will find later, when you look at it again. ...

Well, well, well. Good job, (laugh) Liked the whole david and goliath, good touch. ;) some things you spelled wrong, but I'm pretty sure if you looked it over and ...

Hey! Okay I don't know, I'm not into cussing, and really not into gays. The emotion was good, almost cried, but it fit more for a girl, some things you ...

Hello whatsup! Okay at the begining I enjoyed it, but then when got to the end, I was like what the heck, you used a random cuss word that didn't ...

Hello random story person. I thought this was a story, Now I see that you're telling us that you've read a story. you got me, I think I might read ...

Hey what's up? This seems like a interesting story. I don't get the whole Id give anything to go back just to fall in love with the man whos now ...

Hello there! Okay things I liked: I liked how much it wanted to fly, to be soaring through the air, like his mother father and family. and the some of ...

Hey sup! I really had a fun time reading this, I liked so many things that I can't remember, I actaully liked the ending! it felt like it was going ...