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Re: High School Romance| Chapter 2
Hey there! Happy Review Day! C: So I found it interesting that he was scared to say that he'd come into the wrong class- and that bothers me too because ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Deleted
Hey! Happy Review Day and happy experimenting with new writing formats! C: Seriously, experimenting writing new and different things is what grows us as writers! Even if you decide you ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Sunday-Funday; OPENING SCENE
Hey there! Care for a review this lovely Review Day? I agree with Mea; I think this is a pretty down-right SOLID script! I absolutely love how you laid it ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Year 4
Hello! Happy Review Day! :D I find it quite interesting that BOTH parents took off on them. You always hear about one parent taking off, but seldom two! And I ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Craters
Hey there! Happy Review Day! This is a really cool story! I really like the concept. Like. Cool. And I really liked the twist you had, where it's like "Yayyy, ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: The Little Man
Hey there! Happy Review Month! c: So first of all, I like the sort of old fairy tale feel to this- or, I guess not really fairy tale, but like ...
Sep 18, 2018 -
Re: ● bottleblue ○ [part 1/x] - cloister -
Hey Pomp! I always love it when I see your works around- I guess it just makes me happy that you're posting and still around. C: This was VERY interesting. ...
Sep 2, 2018 -
Re: The Last Nightmare ...
Hello! Happy Review Month! c: So first of all, I like the sort of theatre/film theme of this poem. It certainly gave this poem a very "outside looking in" feel ...
Sep 2, 2018 -
Re: Marble Lungs - Chapter Two
Heyo! Care for a review? For some reason, characters that smoke always feel like super rounded characters to me. I'm not sure why. Maybe because it hints at a lot ...
Aug 21, 2018 -
Re: The Horsemen - Chapter Two
Hello! Oh man, you've been waiting for a review on this chapter for quite awhile! Let me give you one! I haven't read the previous chapter, so I'll just be ...
Aug 20, 2018 -
Re: daily struggles
Noelle! It's been forever since I've reviewed your writing! And forever since I've reviewed period heh. I'm not sure that there's a ton for me to say in terms of ...
Aug 2, 2018 -
Re: Part 2 - Faolan
Hey there! I feel like I haven't reviewed in forever O>O Let's hope this goes okay! Also, I didn't read the first part- hopefully you don't think I'm a horrible ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 5 - Cold Tea Kind of Girl
Hey there! I thought I'd come down here and exercise my reviewing muscle! I really really liked that you put a brief description of what happened in the last chapter! ...
May 18, 2018 -
Re: Drops
Hello there! Rain is such an inspirational thing. It can mean SO many things depending on who's talking about it- ranging from the stereotypical meaning of it being around when ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Night Whispers
Hey Katnes! This to me seems like a sort of villain origin story... am I right? If so, this character certainly has good reason to have "turned to the darkside" ...
Apr 24, 2018
