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Re: Werewolfing. 1
Hey there! I made it at last! I absolutely love your style, how you started out, your MC, the works! In all honestly, there isn't a lot that I could ...
Aug 1, 2016 -
Re: The True Monster
Hey there! How about a review? I found this quite interesting and easy to follow, so it was nice! Although I didn't get to know your MC an awful lot ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: chapter 2
Hey there! I haven't read previous parts so I'll do the best I can. You've got some interesting and amusing dialogue here between your characters. They certainly seem to be ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Cheap Cigarettes
Hello! This has a freakishly awesome amount of depth and I love it. You managed to dodge so many potential cliches and the MC was horrible (I mean 'cause he's ...
Jul 19, 2016 -
Re: Ferrets without Merit: A rap
Hey Kaos! I don't listen to rap or write it a whole lot, but we'll see how this goes. You seem to have a pretty good flow and beat for ...
Jul 18, 2016 -
Re: Hot Boiz
Hey there! How about a review? I love how light this was. I really needed something sort of carefree and spontaneous today! You did a pretty good job of simply ...
Jul 17, 2016 -
Re: Sky Like Spread Legs
Hey there! This certainly had a very poetic style to it, for sure. You mentioned something about trying to put someone's poem into a more... prose form? I haven't read ...
Jul 14, 2016 -
Re: The Last Light Companion [Chapter 1.3]
Hey, Light! I've come as requested! C: So far I think this is a cool beginning. We've got weird things going on, a group of friends that are curious in ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: Shame and Missouri
Hey Morri! I've come to your rescue, as requested. XP I'm actually quite excited, I don't get to review poetry much! This piece felt different than the poetry I've read ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: Watching
Hey there! I've come as requested. c: I like the mysterious vibe that this piece has- it sort of propels the reader forward, trying to get a glimpse of what ...
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 2.5
Hey there! How about a review this lovely day? I haven't read previous parts so hopefully this will go alright. I really liked this, actually. Your characters seem to know ...
Jul 10, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 25
Hello again! I'm glad to see your story progressing- I always find it inspiring seeing people pushing forward and actually getting their novels written. And you have a very action-packed ...
Jul 10, 2016 -
Re: The Travesty of Small Decisions
Hello there! I absolutely love this. It certainly is odd but it says something much much deeper than what is said plainly (I'm sorry, my voice is screwed up right ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: The Gift
Hey there! Yay, I came here in a timely manner! This is a cool idea! I can kind of see what you're trying to do here and it's pretty awesome. ...
Jul 8, 2016 -
Re: The Storyteller chapter 1. - In which positions change, and a story begin
Hey there! Care for a review this fine day? You've got an interesting style here. Your MC's voice I found pretty distinct and easy to follow. I'm not sure that ...
Jul 7, 2016
