Holysocks

Hello! C: It's cool how you were experiencing with this story a lot- it's almost like you tried to have more of a poetic feel to it with the rhythm ...

Hey there! This is a lovely bit of dialogue! I kinda get the feeling that this is sort of a sci-fi story? Or maybe radios just make me think that. ...

Hey there! I like the sort of ominous feel in this work. It's like the MC is running from something but at the same time looking for something-- and I ...

Hey Omni! C: I finally got myself over here! This chapter has a very distinctive tone/atmosphere about it- which I absolutely love. Atmosphere is one of my most favourite things ...

Hey there! Happy RevMo! ^_^ I haven't read previous parts, I'm just jumping right in- hope you don't mind! So like Rache said, Sammy is pretty awesome. Even though I ...

Hey there! You've got a nice start here! You did a really good job of keeping the story moving and full of interesting events- which is absolutely brilliant and needs ...

Hey Costa! I'm excited to give you a review! I haven't read previous chapters, so I'll try to focus more on your devices rather than plot and things like that! ...

Hey Alice! Care for a review? I like the idea that you took the time to write something about your good qualities (I'm assuming it is about you because a ...

Hey there! I love this sort of glimpse into a child's imagination. First we have in the day time, him playing and having a brilliant time with his own imaginings. ...

Hello there! I thought I'd give you a review. c: I think darkness is a pretty easy thing to relate to- or at least, the idea of being suffocated by ...

Hey there! I haven't read previous parts, so please bear with me. I like the atmosphere of this novel. You give us a pretty good image of what's going on ...

Hey there! I feel like I've reviewed some of your stuff before. Also I haven't read previous parts so sorry if I misunderstand something somehow. Letters always give an interesting ...

Hey there! How about a review? It's pretty easy for many of us to relate to this story, I think- being writer's and all! I know whenever I show someone ...

Hey there! I was a little surprised by how short this was! Is this a piece out of something you're working on? Or perhaps you're planning on writing more? I ...

Hey MysteryMinder! You have an interesting message that you're trying to get across! People do always seem to be worrying about how they look and what people think about them. ...