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Re: An Entrepreneur's Lament
Lol your poem mad me did he just die on the spot??
Aug 28, 2015 -
Re: Day and Night
Poem.....eh not so much but a short story......very much. Lol I loved the way you brought Day and night to life and you use so many descriptive words. It was ...
Jun 12, 2015 -
Re: Raindrop
Aww cute poem on a scale of 1 to 10 it gets a 9.9 from me. I loved the way if flowed and sound...lol even though I would have never ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Three Bandits Assault
oh okay understandable
May 19, 2015 -
Re: Slice part 2 (not completed but please still review)
Lol I feel the suspense in the air, but not fear like the first part to this story. But whatever because it still have captivating words that kept me question ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: The Children Of Shadows Chapter 2 Control
Awesome chapter. As I read more I can see myself being Kevin. However my Favorite charter is Meghan. I know you said Kevin is smart, and I know he is ...
May 1, 2015 -
Re: Slice p1
lol I look forward to it
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: The Children Of Shadows Chapter 1 The Birth Of Magic
OH OKAY
Apr 28, 2015 -
Re: The Children Of Shadows Chapter 1 The Birth Of Magic
Hey I finally got a round to reading chapter 1.......love it man, and your boy Kev, man is a real lady killer....Got three of the villages strongest women want to ...
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: Satan's Children
thanks
Apr 27, 2015 -
Re: Satan's Children
yes Mrs. Maddie I know that some of my work is inaccurate with the bible, and that is how I meant for it to book is suppose to show you ...
Apr 24, 2015 -
Re: Satan's Children
Thanks Kevin25a, I really would like to read some of your work as well....and I know a lot of people may hate my story but the kind of writer, and ...
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: Satan's Children
okay thank you
Apr 23, 2015 -
Re: Satan's Children
thank you for that...........lol but how did you like the chapter??
Apr 22, 2015