Holiday30

So I am behind but I back at it again trying to catch up on what has been one of the best stories out here, I am eager to review ...

SO first off, you gotta let me know, what on earth is this lady secrete. Cause obviously the detective found out something that he wasn't suppose to know, otherwise he ...

So I get the privilege of booting this poem out of the green room huh? Let's go! Okay so first off let say I don't get the feel you was ...

Hmmm, I dont like peering, but I wonder in oder to write this you had to have felt this way about someone at some point of time which is quiet ...

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!! ELIZABETH, YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So Your prologue got people interested, then this chapter you introduced us to a rebellious daughter, who character you really defined by the way.

Okay, a zombie story.....I can roll with this, and I like the fact you used your name. very unique. Moving on I quiet like this story and the only complaint ...

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So, the reviewee has become the reviewer.......lol to be honest I always wanted to read some of your work just never got a round to it, further more I just ...

first off let me say...... I love your disclaimer at the the beginning....lol I think I need to incorporate that for most of my works I post be rough drafts, ...

lol, so she took her own life, well you defiantly when the award for unseen plot twist.....Jack me up I swear, but I personally wouldn't have it under horror. Suspenseful ...

Hmm....I taste, great writing, a pinch a mystery, a little bit of Morgan freeman...(lol god complex on the max), and a sprinkle of a good plot......taste pretty good, but I ...

lol, why? Cecilia has become almighty, while Ren is stuck in the background. I do like the fact that Cecilia has been doing this to protect her brother, but I ...

Hey there my, friend, I just enjoyed another master piece. FYI, BlueAfrica is a really good reviewer so you should take whatever pointers he/she gives you. Moving on, I didn't ...

Okay, just gotta say this first. This story , chapter is beyond mind blowing. You had me laughing crying, happy, and mad. God this piece was........oowee. LOl that's the only ...

So I am back(Yay! Lets give him around of applause.) I am sorry, I just been so busy lately with me moving and going to basketball practice, trying to find ...