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Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! If you are interested I have more chapters available in my portfolio on my profile page. Stay Gold Ponyboy! -HobbitMan222

Thank you for the feedback! I'll look into your suggestions. Also if you liked it there are some chapters that appeared before this one. Check them out in my portfolio ...

Again, love the story! Keep it up! I can't wait for more!!! :3 Live Long and Prosper! -HobbitMan222

(Accidentally posted) wrong, but my buddy insisted otherwise. Again, thanks for sticking with it. In the next chapter it gets a lot better :3 *mischievious face*

Thank you for the feedback and the help with the grammar. I thought that was

Once again thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you like it and I always look forward to reading your reviews. I'll fix some of the minor problems when I get ...

Thank you for once again giving me amazing feedback! I'm slowly but surely incorporating the things you tell me :3 Btw, don't worry. There are female characters on the way ...

Sorry everyone for the length. Do keep in mind that I split it into parts :3

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Sorry everyone for the length. Do keep in mind that I split it into parts :3

Ignore this. I posted my review in the wrong spot.... :/

Hey Aley! This is Ol' Hobbitman222 giving you a review as well! I agree with many of the points Writer1204 made in the previous review. I believe you are a ...

Thank you for the continuous feedback! And yes, that is exactly what's happening. I myself have noticed the tense swapping due to my buddy and I going in and editing ...

Just you wait. There is more to come :3

Hey RoyalHighness! I wanted to start out by saying that this is a very interesting poem. I'm not going to sit here and tell you that there are numerous grammar ...

Ignore this second post. Apparently every time I submit a review it gets doubled... So I'm not spamming you, if that's what you were wondering. :3