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Hi :) I thought this poem was really great. The language you used to convey something that is completely accurate and true is really amazing. The first stanza was great. ...

Wow. Really nice poem. I thought your rhyming was super clever and great, I know I could never do it. Also, I agree with one of your previous comments; a ...

An acronym. Wow, that's different. I haven't read one on this site yet. I have to say I'm always so impressed when someone uses a rhyme scheme in, their poem ...

FAVORITE!! Haha..I enjoyed the poem. I think by just making a little longer, it will really add to the feeling that you really love this person because your going on ...

Wow, I really loved this. I assumed you were talking about greed and the human obsession with money and wealth. Am I right?.....anyway, it is short but I think it ...

To start, I think the inspiration behind him is pretty cool and it's what made me want to read the poem in the first place. I was really interested as ...

Hi. Just a quick review, a few comments. I thought this was really nice peice. Just the structure alone...I think you did a nice job separating your stanza..something I suck ...

Somehow, I read the title and got surprised when it was actually about a toast. Haha...it's really simple and pretty funny actually. Nevertheless, I have to say I thought it ...

I really loved this. I thought it was beautifully written and boy, can I relate. I really feel like the simplicity of it not only makes it inviting to read ...

Definitely something I really enjoyed about this poem. I liked the overall structure of it. I think it made it easier to read or at the very least, that much ...

Hey. Just wanted to leave a few comments... This is by far, the weirdest thing I've read on here so far and I say that in the best way. Definitely ...

Great poem. Just a few comments. I think the choice to keep it short is okay except for the fact that it almost feels as though your poem isn't finished. ...

Hi. I enjoyed this...just a few comments. I think the choice to be somewhat simple about it and go short was really cool. Same kind of concept with the title. ...