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Re: Amongst the Robins and the Rivers
this reminds me of that old thought experiment thing. Where it is there are a bunch of people tied up in a cave there entire lives, with only shadows on ...
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Re: You, and Everything Else That Matters
this poem is very nice, it is not long, but it does not have to be in order to get its point across, it very easily displays sadness and loss ...
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Re: Practice List of intEresting AnimalS of notE
I love this concept, it takes a little bit to read it, but the bold really helps flesh out what your looking for. It begs the question why? Whose jack? ...
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Re: this is your inheritance
Wow, i havent seen anything like this before. Its short but sweet and it gives this almost a longing feeling, while also being angry. I think that it is slightly ...
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Re: Outside Looking In
I don't typically read or write free verse, but this flows really well and i enjoyed reading it. It really captures that sort of loneliness that someone can feel when ...
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Re: Control Z World
This is the first play i have read on here, its very interesting. There is a bit of confusion as to why Luna's mom is at the school, but other ...
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Re: Heels Outside The Bus Terminal
Oh my gosh. This has to be the best thing i've read on this website, the journal style fits so much into one post, the way that every entry ends ...
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Re: "Sir, are you Batman?" Chapter 1- Downtown Gotham Sucks ( A lot)
Man, gotta say, i love this idea. Em starts out seemingly like a totally normal gotham citizen, but by the end of the chapter i am leaning toward her being ...
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Re: The Performance
Hello, i saw your review request, i'm still new to this, but lets give it a shot! As someone who does piano recitals, i do think that this is very ...
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Re: On the Overmorrow Chapter One- Three Perfect Strangers
Alright, so I'm a bit new to this, but I adore this concept so I'm gonna give it a shot. The first thing i noticed was the name 'Aren' now, ...
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Re: Once Upon a Time a Long Time Ago....
WOW! ok this is awesome. I love the way that at the beginning of each stanza it repeats the title. The madman really showcases how much one person can effect ...
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Re: Clowns, Magic, Murder, and Lies: It all comes down to mystery (Five short stories)
I haven't read any of your other stuff from this series, but this seems really cool! I think that Philippa's is the most interesting story. Her parents not knowing what ...
May 12, 2024
