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Re: The Winter Rose
Hullo! I'm HibiscusBlush and I’m here with a review! I've never seen the show Game of Thrones, I know next to nothing about it, however I know it’s set in ...
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: Cast Off The Mask, Love What's Beneath
Hullo, hullo. =) I just wanna say, your ability to weave meaningfulness with description is immaculate! It's done in a way that's easy on the eyes and therefore beautiful to ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: The Pajama Man -- Part 1/3
Heya Yoda. You have a great grasp of your characters, even if you didn't use tags of who said what, each voice is distinct enough for me to tell who's ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: Strawberry Lake
That ending made me laugh! He accomplished his goal of becoming a hero but his fear of the water was cemented further into fact….Great stuff. :D I thought it was ...
May 24, 2012 -
Re: The Odd One Out.
Hi, ToBeMe I love how different this story is and the vulnerability of it was written really well. =) The poetic rhythm makes it so quirky and unique, format wise, ...
May 22, 2012 -
Re: Ciel: Something of Fear
Hi Aelita :D This left a strange and wistful sensation stirring around in me. I mean, yes, like you said, it is deep in terms of literary works but it ...
Dec 27, 2011 -
Re: Winter Air
Helllooww Tucker! What a beautifully enchanting tale....definately a far fetch from Sea of Snow, of which wow! I LOVED how much depth your rung out a bleak winter day. Both ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Yeahhh... No title yet
O'MiGoodness! I love this! I love, love, love the dramatic tension--sooo captivating! I like the simplicity in your writing that illuminated the characters actions and the tone of the story ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Things Found in Ditches
Hey!! Huh...I’ve never thought about what resides in a ditch before! You've really captured the essence for each sentence and I love the individuality and creativity. Though, I did notice ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Inferno Prologue
Wow =) Again, I can't complain with anything. My experience of reading this was like being immersed in a haze watching the frantic scene in slow a way. If you ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Baldwin on Lexington Road
Hii! I think the fact that this was an actual experience of yours and you were able to pour onto the page like velvet wine excelled it to perfection for ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 2.
Hi Dragongirl! I really love this clever and modern twist to the Cinderella story and you painted good, vivid scenes here emphasizing on the characters realistic mannorisms. Which is Brilliant! ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Behind The Mirror
That ending is magnificent. It stunned me and creeped me out yet I was thrilled at the same time by the pure genius of your story on top of so ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: My Mind, My Murderous Mind
Whoa, Whoa, Whoa, Whooooooooooa ! Well, now that I can breathe again, I shall comment! Everything I have to say about your story is good. The moral of it itself ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: New Eyes.
Hi HausofDay =) I don't know how to begin to tell you how absolutely stunning this is. It totally is. It's the epitome of stunning. I'm stunned. The only thing ...
Sep 29, 2011
