Hibiscus

My goodness all of "this" was genius! The ending blew me away! I felt her jealousy of her husbands love for writing his poems. It was just...just so lovely. Everything ...

Oh wow... I actually don't know what to say to this one. Um... I don't think it was bad...no, it wasn't bad. It was just so very... interesting that I ...

I actually felt it was very story like, and that it would make an excellent story. I kind of wanna know more... or have more to read, I should say, ...

As per usual, your poems are magnificent. This one to me, I could really feel like I was there in the particular place. The use of sensory imagery, engaging not ...

The parts I liked- This line: "...enchanting and sweet. Delicious swan songs bring me relief." This stanza: "Drink a shot, it surely hits, like a wave of bliss she surely ...

That was certainly something worth while reading. I felt like I was actually watching a scene of a movie, sorry if that was not in your intentions. The imagery I ...

I liked the imagery, first off, and the theme and subject you were going for. I liked the idea and the context of the poem, as well, and it's intentions. ...

Sorry that this is totally off topic, but whenever I see the word insomniac I think of that song, "Fireflies" by Owl City. Because the singer of that is an ...

I will say this was much better than that "Sand" poem of yours I just read... well, partially read. Anyway, I liked the poem up until like the end... because ...

So... because I'm me, I'm going to say that I got bored. I only read up tooo... *Scrolls down* Somewhere on the minuscule line... I have to say, instead of ...

I picked up Twilight before it become such a huge popular thing. And honestly, I still don't hate it. I enjoyed being able to read Twilight, because I like reading. ...

I don't know... if I liked this book. When I had to read it for my English class... we read it together, but "reading" it together meant listening to a ...

The best book I have ever read I have a completely worn out copy of it in my bedroom. I made two friends read it and my Freshman English teacher. ...

I think you could have added more action amongst the dialogue. There was a lot of straight chunks of dialogue that could get confusing. Action is important as well, even ...