Published July 7, 2010
ha ha the chew makes me spew
I grew to a moo
Speak of you
down in the crew
wiggle giggle goblins wisper
little aleins tell me no
go get snus and speak thus
he he ge ge gong
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Not sure how ot take this one to be honest. What is the message? Is there one?
Oh wow... I actually don't know what to say to this one.
Um... I don't think it was bad...no, it wasn't bad.
It was just so very... interesting that I don't know what to say about it.
Other than aliens is spelled wrong... unless you meant that on purpose?
Good job? Hehe.
First things first. I'm a big Goethe fan so I have to say I love your name. Anyways, this poem makes absolutely no sense at all, but that wouldn't really matter unless it was boring. And its not. Matter of fact, its lack of coherence only enhances the childish malevolence of the narrator. Good luck on your future work.