Hibiscus

I like the way the poem is broken up. The stanzas feel like their there for pauses and breaks, and that's nice, but I like the way each line is ...

I love the way it starts out with such beautiful and rich imagery. I thought it was going to be more of a love poem when I started reading, but ...

I liked the overall idea for this poem. I think it makes a lot of sense on the relationships we have with others. I agree that you should have broken ...

I think it works a lot as a poem about love. I mean, of course it's about freckles, but I think some people can write just about a basketball and ...

I agree with alack being out of place, but I understand it's for your meter. Ummm, so, yeah, the first stanza is amazing. She slides along the spurting stream of ...

I was generally surprised. At first, starting out, when I was reading the poem, I was kind of iffy. I was worried about where it was going. But then, when ...

Not only was it amazing, it rhymed! Hehe. Double-bonus. Not that I think poems have to rhyme to be good or anything, or if they don't rhyme they're not good. ...

Ooo, we even getz a picture a long with it. I don't know, but I felt like I really got into this. First off, the picture reminded me of something, ...

Ooooooooo, I really liked that. I love how all of it was completely relevant, and, you managed to make it rhyme. I really caught up on everything, and at at ...

This was fabulous, but also so very sad. The imagery was gorgeous. My favorite line has to be, as depressing as it is, "Chased under the hulking train of humanity." ...

I'm not a good poet so bear with me. And this is not a true story it just kind of came to me, although i did have friend that cut ...

I don't know... I felt like, the narrator was actually talking to themselves. The lines such as: I saw your face the other day. It stared at me for a ...

We used to live inside a fairy tale-- With colors, music, life and love. It was, so far, the perfect world, And we were, so far, the perfect pair. We ...

I didn't read anyone else's comments, so pardon me if I repeat anything. So... this was pretty good. I just want to say that maybe you could have done better ...

You are nothing but a fairytale Is fiction not a crime? A gripping tale of courage, Your lies are like a chime. If you where as noble, As your caracter ...