Henox

Heyy, This somehow really reminds me of harry potter, with the houses and letters. I haven't read the first part, but I sure will go and do it sometime soon! ...

Hey, Nice story! From my point of view, I guess you had some experience in writing before this. I like your descriptions, sometimes it's really hard to find the right ...

Hello :) Interesting idea, and I like how you have put it all together. There are some bits of the story I would have done differently, but I guess yours ...

I don't know what to tell you except it is a great beginning! I'm not very experienced with writing, so don't expect a fancy review. :) I like the way ...

Great! You have done the prologue excellently! I love the mystery and the suspense. You explained the man's sadness and fear very well. I just don't know how to imagine ...

Hey! Interesting story... It is funny how you made it 16+ and it says her you're only 14. Unfortunately I think there really are families like this, and what is ...

Hey! Your poem is pretty good. But I think that the crying girl doesn't mean that much to the bully, so, i don't think that he would even mention her ...

Great! I'm happy that there are still some Bionicle fans left! Everything in the story was great. I think there are some canonical issues. How could there be a female ...