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Hey! I'm Stela and I'll be reviewing for you today. I really think you have a beautiful, almost poetic piece in the making. However, there are some things that caught ...

I would just like to mention that SPEAKING LIKE THIS IS OFTEN PERCEIVED AS SCREAMING. If you really want to emphasize something you can instead try and italicize like this. ...

I like the idea of this, and I like what you're trying to say. It's not really a story, it's more like making a point about something using a fictional? ...

Hey! I'm Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today. First of all, I would suggest that you structure this in a different way. It's just a pargraph right ...

Hey Skins! Another awesome chapter for which I'm very grateful! Okay, here we go: I dropped my hand to my side along with my phone and glanced left, then right, ...

Hey There! I'm here to review for you as requested! Your first paragraph is your hook. You need to make that interesting. At the moment, there is repetiotion of words ...

Hey Bookworm, I'm here to review as requested! No nitpicks, as those were covered, but I will give you a general impression. First of all, I would just like to ...

Hey there, Tabby! I'm here to review for you as requested! I'll start out with the nitpicks, get them out of the way. Noah walked out his front door, and ...

Hey Skins! I'm here to review as requested! First, I'll point out some nitpicks and then I'll talk about the story in general. "It’s almost ten o’ clock in the ...

Hey octo! After the utterly beautiful, detailed review that you have me a couple of days back, it makes me really sad to say that there is no WAY I ...

Hey there! I'm here to review as requested! I shall start off with some nitpicks :) 'I scrunched my nose in disgust, trying my best to block out every possible ...

This is not a proper review, I just wanted to say that I found this hilarious. At first, I thought it was about someone who literally died, then I thought ...

Great job, RazHuni! Hahaha :D I loved it! It's hilarious. Definitely a compromise between the two, as you said ;) Gosh, these things cause a lot of controversy, no? Loved ...

Hello there, The person who wrote 'Ten reasons why women are better than men' here to review for you! Anyway, when you capitalize you make yourself sound desperate for your ...

Hey there, Wow, this really is something. I'm sorry this happened and I'm sorry people are this messed up. It was a Friday, in the late morning ,W hen she ...